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Showing posts with label saruja comments. Show all posts
Showing posts with label saruja comments. Show all posts

Friday, 31 July 2015

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( San Tat and Oh S'mar )

I did this comment for San Tat and Oh S'mar. They both did a great job by creating a poster about Maori Language Week.

Saruja- Blog Commenting (Oh S'mar )



I did this comment for Oh S'mar, because he did a great job by creating a DLO explained his strategy.

Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Saruja- Blog Comment ( Tamaki Primary School)


I did this blog Comments for Tamaki Primary School. They did a great job and they did some art . I really like the most s the dragon, because it's look cool. I think they did well

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Aung )



 I did this comment for Aung, In room 7. He made a brochure about his dad character. I really like the picture that he chosen. I think he did well. 

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Manu )



I did this blog commenting for Manu, because he showed that he understand all about Complex sentence and he showed it by Venn Diagram.  I think he did well and now he know all about Complex sentence.

Saturday, 4 July 2015

SAruja- Blog Commenting ( June)

Saruja said...
HI June,
Your groups film was perfect, but i will be better if you speaks little bit loud , because it was so hard for me to understand what were talking. I still like how you speak with confident.I also like how you dressed you look like a teacher. Next time when you are making a movie make sure you are specking loud and find a best place that you can shoot. Over that you did a perfect work with your group. I think you did well.
Keep up the good work!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja


I did this blog comment for June and I really enjoyed watching their film. They did a great job.  

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Linda )

Hi Linda,
You did a great job, because you made a fantastic poster. You have done a great job by retelling the story. I think you did well. Keep it up.

Your Sincerely,
Saruja

I did this blog comment for Linda, because she made a wonderful poster about Matariki. I really like that colour hat she chosen. I think she did well. 

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Sanujan )

Hi Sanujan,

Your photo is looking like that you both are punching each other. But I founded that's an action because you explain it at the bottom. I think you both did well ,
Keep it up
Your Sincerely,
Saruja

I did this blog comment for Sanujan, because he did a perfect action with Liam. They did well together and they explained what they did. I think they did well.

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Ducati)

Hi Ducati,
Wow, I think you did well with simple and compound sentence. I also did this game, but I just got 72, but you got 92. That's good. I think you did well.

Sincerely,
Saruja 

I did this blog comment for Ducati, because he did well with his simple and compound sentences. 

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Manu)

Hi Manu,
What a coo presentation about burgers, I really like how you work hard, but first check you colours. Do you think yellow and white will match together, I don't think so. I really like the picture and information about burgers.I think you did well, next time check you colours and background. Keep it up!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja

I did this blog comment for Manu, because he made a fantastic presentation about burgers. I learnt lots of things from that presentation. I think he did well. 

Friday, 3 July 2015

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Sajiha )

Hi Sajiha ,
I really like your homework I really like how you chosen the colours. I really like your information about him. I think you did well and no correction for you, because you did every thing correct.

Keep it up,

Your Sincerely,
Saruja
I did the blog comment for Sajiha, because she made a great DLO about Galileo. I really like ow she worked had, because everything is cool.

Saruja- Blog Commeting ( Jacob )


Saruja said...
Hi Jacob,
I really like your presentation , but thing about you colours and background. For me it's very hard to read the sentence because your background and the fonts colours are not match. Next time when yuo are doing something on presentation check if the fonts colour and the background are matching.
Keep working hard!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja

I did this blog comment for Jacob. He did well but he forgot to check his colours. I think he will fix it next time.

Saruja - Blog Commenting (Tim )


Saruja said...
Hi Tim,
Yours and Raymond's conversation is short and it has more information. i think this is brave because ifaketext can't fit more that 5 but you have 7, because you conversation is short. I think you did well with Raymond
Keep it up,
Your Sincerely,
Saruja
I did this blog comment for Tim, because he did well wit Raymond and they did a conversation about Conjunctions . I think they did well

Saruja - Blog Commenting ( Tiare)

Saruja said...
Hi Tiare,
Wow!
This is a cool and interesting poster, because the colour is perfect, the fonts and the writing. I think you did great. Keep it up, and work hard.

Your Sincerely,
Saruja

I did this blog commenting for Tiare, because I saw her poster and it was so cool, so I dicdec to comment on hers. 

Saruja- Blog Commenting ( Juanita)


Saruja said...
Hi Juanita,
It will be better if you put some pattern behind the writing. I like you poster and like the writing they are cool. I think you did well, keep it up.

Your Sincerely,
Saruja


I did this comment for Juanita, because she did well with her and she created a poster abut should we change he flag.

Saturday, 27 June 2015

Saruja- Comment ( Zeba )

Saruja said...
Hi Zeba,
You did a brilliant job, because you poster is looking perfect and powerful.I really like how you chosen that colours. I think you did well.
Keep it up,

Your sincerely,
Saruja

I made this comment for Zeba, because she did a brilliant job with Sajiha. I think she did well. 

Saruja- Comment ( Fine )

Saruja said...
Hi Fine,
This is a best homework , I ever seen. You have add lots of facts and information about him. I really like how you add the facts in one slide and you add a quote. I really like how you explained about Telescope. I think you did brilliant and amazing work.

Keep it up!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja


I made this comment for Fine, because she did a brilliant work on her homework. I think she did well. She have add lots of information about Galileo and facts about him. 

Sunday, 21 June 2015

Saruja- Comment ( Patrick )

Saruja said...
Hi Patrick,
Wow you did a great work. Your answer 4 x 11 =? in 91 seconds.
It's good ! I can see that you worked so hard to keep your second low not high. This is how you can improve you times table and try to do them again , and see if you did better that this one.
Keep it up!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja :)


I did this comment to Patrick. He did a wonderful work buy learning  his 11 times table. He answer all the question well, but he need to answer them little bit fast, so he will get 92s or 95s. Anyway I think he did a fantastic work. 

Saruja- Comment ( Yvette )

 Saruja said...
Hello Yvette,
Wow!!!
This is wonderful and fantastic letter to editor, because you have been used some new words that some kids doesn't know. This is how people can improve their writing by using some hard words and explained it. You have done it, which mean that you are good writer. From this I learned that this is how we write a letter to other and it have to be very clear, so the reader can understand what are we talking about. You did a magnificent and awesome work.

Keep it up!!

Your Sincerely,
Saruja :)


I did a comment this morning and I was looking all the blog and I saw wonderful letter to the editor and it was Yvette. I never read letter like that, because she have used some hard  word and she wrote the letter powerful. I think that she did a wonderful work.

Friday, 12 June 2015

Saruja- Commenting

Today I did a blog commenting to Patrick. He did a wonderful job by learning his new words in room 5. It will be better if he learn  hard words and do some dictation like this.