Tuesday 9 December 2014
Friday 5 December 2014
Saruja- Design Brief
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CONCEPTUAL STATEMENT:
In the context of Healthy Living I will design and produce an Animated Story for Family to be used to to show them that I am care about them.
My digital story does relate to healthy living because my story is about healthy food. My digital story is useful for my target audience because it tall that ice- cream is unhealthy for a grandma.
SPECIFICATIONS:
The outcome will include:
[list the specifications that you will include into your website]
Sprites or Character 2+
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no
yes
no
no
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Commands or Scripts
-Say
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yes
yes
yes
yes
yes
no
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Background
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no
yes
no
no
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Command and Feedback
feedback that I received about my digital story included
- I really like your scratch video and your background is very different to the others but other then that it is really good!!!
- This is a great animation so far but you should explain why these foods are not healthy. You should back up your point with fact. Keep it up though!
- Your first few speech marks are too fast, and the ones after that too slow. also, add commas and the person with the orange suit seem to be standing on the shelves.
- I love the background you've chosen. Try make it more interesting by adding sound effects or more characters. Keep up the great learning.
- A few of your speech bubbles are too fast but keep up the good work
- I really like your video on scratch and I want to see more and I really enjoy your scratch video and it looks like you had fun making this scratch video and keep up the great work.
Change I made to my digital story included
- Making the bubbles taking fast.
- Adding interesting sounds.
- Explain why the food are unhealthy.
- Adding more characters.
Final Evaluation
- The way that I feel about my digital story is little bit ok because I didn't add more background and people.
- I could also use Scratch or Create digital stories to make story about Tamaki College and Panmure Bridge school.
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