Quality Blog Comments ( Tamaki Primary School Art Technology group )

This is my forth blog commenting for Tamaki Primary. Today My focus was to write a proper blog commenting for people. To see if my blog commenting does make sense, I have read through again, thats the way we have find mistakes in our own work. This kind of activity helps me to understand how to write proper blog comment.

Quality Blog Comments ( Room 3 PBS)

This is my third quality blog comments for room 3. They have done a great job by learning how to make groups of five and they put all together and they have created a video. I really liked the way they worked together. 

Quality Blog Comments ( Room 5 -Yvette)

As part of writing, we were learning how to write quality  log comments for people. This is my comment for room 5 blog post toYvette. Her presentation was looking really nice and she has a big strong talent to speck in front of audience. I think she did a great job. This kind of activity helps me to write quality blog and also helps me to check my own work.

Quality Blog Comments ( Courtney )

As part of writing,we were learning how to writing quality blog comment. This is my blog comment for Courntey, I have writing,  the things that she did better and thee thins that she can change next time.  I think this comment will help Courtney to check if she choosing the correct colour.