Rewrite the Ending
If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen? Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened.
Post it onto your blog with the following information.
-Title- Friends New Girl In Town
- Author- Marilyn Easton
- Type of Book- Made up story
---Why is your ending is better............
4 comments:
Hi Saruja,
I really like how you use powtoon for rewrite the end and Its very cool.
Keep up the great work!!
Its good that you are taking time for doing fun activities.
Sincerely
Sanujan.S
Hi Saruja,
I really like your the effort you put into this to make this powtoons to rewrite the story, just one little mistake. You have a spelling error at the start, you wrote Holiday Readinng instead of Holiday Reading . But everything else is awesome,
Keep it up
Tim
Hi Saruja,
I really like your the effort you put into this to make this powtoons to rewrite the story, just one little mistake. You have a spelling error at the start, you wrote Holiday Readinng instead of Holiday Reading . But everything else is awesome,
Keep it up
Tim
Thank you Tim and Sanujan for your positive feedback.
Thank you tim for letting e know that I have mistake.
Have a great holiday.
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