This is my Food shop product. I have been created this product at Tamaki Collage at Tech with Mrs Anderson. I haven't finish all of my product,but I think I have done well
Please comment on my blog if you like my Scratch.
Hi Saruja Your first few speech marks are too fast, and the ones after that too slow. also, add commas and the person with the orange suit seem to be standing on the shelves.
I really like your video on scratch and I want to see more and I really enjoy your scratch video and it looks like you had fun making this scratch video and keep up the great work.
7 comments:
Hi Saruja
I really like your scratch video and your back round is very different to the others but other then that it is really good!!!
Shaylah
Hi Saruja,
This is a great animation so far but you should explain why these foods are not healthy. You should back up your point with fact. Keep it up though!
Yours Sincerely,
Fine
Hi Saruja
Your first few speech marks are too fast, and the ones after that too slow. also, add commas and the person with the orange suit seem to be standing on the shelves.
Hi saruja,
I love the background you've chosen. Try make it more interesting by adding sound effects or more characters. Keep up the great learning.
Thank you Shaylah, FIne and Mengchun I will correct those mistake that I did, and do it nice.
Hi saruja
A few of your speech bubbles are to fast but keep up the good work
Hi Saruja
I really like your video on scratch and I want to see more and I really enjoy your scratch video and it looks like you had fun making this scratch video and keep up the great work.
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